100WC week #23

here is my 100wc…

“watch me wip know watch me nae nae” I mumbled listening to the music. Mum called me for down dinner. I rushed downstairs to eat… I imagined what it would be like to have all I could see…But being me I wasn’t able to eat it all, I jumped in the dinner chair and ate all I could. After dinner I headed to my room and… MY, PUG was poopen on my bed. Like “RANGO GET OFF”. I went to bed and woke up with rango… on my face. He was snorting like crazy… I put him in the yard… and I never saw that snorting creature again.

here is my goal…

today I aimed to use my life experiences. I love pugs and used to live in a really big house.

here is the prompt…

…I imagined what it would be like to have all I could see…

One Response

  1. oliver2014 at |

    Hey Tara!
    I like your word choice and how you made the feel you emotion. I also like how you put bold letters to give the reader ore information on what you want then to feel. If had to pick a negative I would say that you used this […] six times in a 100 word story. Maybe just dial that down a little but other than that I enjoyed reading you story!

    From Ollie

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